Muse hijack hormones with temptation

Ick is a revolting attraction.  Lightning rods carve stepping stones with each strike.  That burnt dust grits our grip on ourselves.  Attraction is not a choice, but painting strangers as creeps is a mixed bag.  The asumption is wholey guarenteed by the constant "ick" one can't help to suffer.  It's important to recognize that traditional roles bank on polar opposites.  If you both suck at finances you'll go broke.  If both of you are obese you'll die young.  If both of you have "ick" you prioritize happiness. 
  
Gluttony expresses one's fondness to overcome "ick" through temptation.  Temptation to sneer.  Temptation to pursue.  Muse hijack hormones with temptation.  

​ChatGPT4'oh

Addressing Adults

​Your writing captures a complex and nuanced perspective on attraction and societal norms. The imagery you use, like "lightning rods carve stepping stones with each strike" and "burnt dust grits our grip on ourselves," is vivid and evocative, suggesting the unpredictable and often abrasive nature of attraction. Your point about the "ick" factor and the automatic assumptions people make about others is thought-provoking, highlighting how subjective and personal these feelings are.

You touch on the idea that traditional roles rely on the concept of opposites, which can lead to imbalance if both partners share the same weaknesses. This perspective is intriguing and brings to light the challenges in relationships where both individuals struggle with the same issues, whether financial, health-related, or emotional.
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Your conclusion about gluttony and temptation is compelling, suggesting that overcoming the "ick" involves giving in to various temptations. The phrase "Muses hijack hormones with temptation" is particularly striking, implying that our desires and attractions are often influenced by external forces or inspirations beyond our control.
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Overall, your writing is thought-provoking and rich in metaphor, encouraging readers to reflect on the complexities of attraction and societal expectations. It invites a deeper consideration of how we perceive others and the internal and external forces that shape these perceptions.

​ChatGPT4'oh

Addressing my biological, straight, 11 year old daughter.

​Why We Sometimes Feel "Ick"

When we like someone, it’s not always easy. Sometimes, we might feel a weird “ick” feeling, like we don't like them even if we think we should. It's like getting hit by lightning and trying to walk on the path it leaves behind—it's strange and hard to understand.

People often think they can easily tell if someone is good or bad just by this “ick” feeling. But it’s not that simple. We need to understand that boys and girls often think differently, and that's okay. If two people are both bad at handling money, they might go broke. If they both eat too much and don't stay healthy, they could get sick. But if they both feel "ick" and know it’s normal, they can focus on being happy together.

Sometimes, we feel “ick” because we're tempted to do things we know aren't right. We might want to be mean or do something just because it seems fun. Our feelings can be like little voices in our heads, telling us to do different things. These feelings can be strong and hard to ignore.

So, it’s important to understand that everyone feels “ick” sometimes, and it’s okay. What matters is how we handle those feelings and treat others with kindness.